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Dreaming under cherry - tree by ~AkinoSuzume:iconAkinoSuzume:


©2009 ~AkinoSuzume
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This is my entry for :iconapplefreak56:'s contest:D :D :D
I just wanted to know what other people think about my drawings.
Topic was to draw AppleFreak56 OC: Mizuki , or her with that guy - Ayashi.


Mizuki looks like strong character for me. Ayashi also looks like energetic trouble-maker, so they may fight often:D But even people like Ayashi have moments of reflection.

He sat alone under cherry - tree and before he realized he started to think about the girl that he cherish the most and who seems to hate him - Mizuki...


Damn, that pic caused me so much troube. Firstly ink appeard to be to liquid and stained first version. Secondly I couldnt shade as I wanted. And now this fuckin' scanner killed the shading even more... Damn... I'll replace that as soon as I manage to do better scan. But drawing characters - esp Mizuki - was fun^^

I don't own the poses - I saw them on internet and draw from my mind(that was pretty hard...) And I don't worry 'bout Ayashi black hand - I just started to shade with the ink before I realized what I'm doing=P

Please write what's wrong and on what should I focus in the future:)


Mizuki and Ayashi belongs to AppleFreak56
Picture belongs to me

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:iconwarchild15:
I think you have a great concept here!

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:iconakinosuzume:
Thanks^^ God,you're fast:D

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:iconwarchild15:
haha! :D that's me!!

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Somewhere In Narnia~

Aslan: Ho Shit!!!!

Mr.Tumnus: What Is It Great Jesus Lion Of Mystical Places Unknown???

Aslan:...I Sense A Disturbance In The Force...
:iconakinosuzume:
:D :D

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:iconapplefreak56:
Wow! :D
That's so romantic! And I love it! :D
and Mizuki's face expression is just awesome!
And Ayashi's pose.. OMG so hard to draw!

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:iconakinosuzume:
Awwww, thank you:hug:
I wasn't sure if my version resembles originals... But if you like it it's ok I guess:D
And it was hell to draw it - all from mind...

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:iconmaripocket:
:wave: hi
this is great :clap:I like the most how the tree branch looks :D

and Ayashi's pose it is really hard to do it
as a tip for you to improve :thumbsup: I can tell you that the position of his foot on the left should be pointing to the opposite side, you can understand better what I'm trying to say here "click on me"
hope it help you on the future
nice drawing :iconimseriousplz:

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:iconakinosuzume:
Thanks!

Yeah, I see what you mean. Thanks for pointing that out, I would never realize that myself:D

And you're pretty good at commenting - I mean things like:"cute" and "beautiful" are nice but the best are comments that help you to see your mistakes:movingon:

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